[UPDATE: I have gone ahead with the change to the new brand tagline. Thanks for the feedback! ]

I have been thinking about changing the branding tagline of my site for a while now and have come up with the following:

Thomas Davis | Creative Design & Development.

Compared with the original:

Thomas Davis | Online Design & Creation.

I think the new tagline reflects more on what I actually do: online design ie: website design & development but also "offline" design such as leaflets, posters & logos.

What do you think?